Tuesday, 13 September 2016

Task B1: Descriptive Reflection.




2a. Your English Language Journey:

            All my life, English has always been a weakness to me. Even though it is a language used globally, at times, I find it difficult to make a proper sentence without making any mistakes. For example, the correct sentence structure used, the correct tenses and the correct pronunciation. Moreover, there are a lot of “conditions” in the English text that we have to pay attention to or else, the sentence structure could be wrong. To add on, we also need to know when to use the correct tenses, grammar, adjectives and verbs in a sentence. These are basically nightmares to me as my foundation in English is not strong enough to know what is right and what is wrong when I speak and write. 

            My perspective of English - being my weakness, changes was when I had the courage to learn from my past mistakes and learning from it when speaking or writing in English. From then on, I find myself having the courage to challenge myself in speaking and writing good English. Despite having some mistakes in my sentence structure initially, I did not condemn myself, instead I learn whenever people correct my mistakes and try not to make the same mistakes in future again. Till this day, the only achievement I feel proud of myself for English is scoring an A in my assignments during my polytechnic days. To me scoring a B in English is really difficult, let alone an A. 

            Thus, having an A for a few of my assignments was a very satisfied accomplishment throughout my English journey. Through this journey, I also realized that having to know your mistakes and to correct it is really important as it can help you to convey your message across better with good English. To sum up, every day is a learning journey for me as I discover new “languages” and different (hidden) meanings behind this language I called, English.

4 comments:

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  2. Good write up, you included your experiences on how u dealt with English language.
    You followed the procedure of the what,how,why.

    However, things to improve.
    - In the 1st para, you mentioned 'we' ,since you started of "I find it difficult to" (line 2), it would be better to be 'I', because its what you feel.

    - In para 1 (line 3)
    'correct sentence structure used, the correct tenses and the correct pronunciation.'
    can probably shortened to ,'correct sentence structure, tenses and pronunciation.'

    - In your conclusion, you can probably elaborate on the 'take away' include the feelings on why and how you feel it was important.

    Overall good job :)

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  3. Overall good job, you have portrayed your journey with the language well with the use of examples.

    However you may wish to be more concise for some of the sentences and also consider the change of some expressions used in your sentences for example instead of "Even though it is a language used globally" you may wish to say" Even though it is a widely used language". Another example would be “ changes was when I had the courage to learn from my past mistakes” to “I only started improving on my English when I decided to face my past mistakes”.

    Good job :)

    - Hui Wen

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  4. I can fully empathise with the pains of learning a language in which one is weak in. But, do persevere :)

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